Talk:Adasa's search for the crystals/@comment-206.169.203.164-20120807200137

I am going to be picky about a couple things :p

It is Phaltanax (Phal for short, because apparently Benn dislikes multi-syllabic names).

There is absolutely no references to pooper scoopers, or any of the other amazing one liners that were thrown about (Even Adasa had a couple good ones).

Benn was fuming that they wouldn't let him kill him, he is more than plenty of a group by himself to take him on.

There was a very distinct lack of adjectives describing Benn (a small sample of applicable choices: Charming, Dashing, Handsome, Humorous, Intelligent, Genius, Amazing, Wonderful, Virile, Comedic.)

Example: The charming, virile and dashingly handsome Benn took that chance to mock Adasa, utilizing his comedic genius to accentuate his amazing intelligence, and wonderfully humorous nature.

You'll notice how the sentence rolls off the tongue with the ease of a freshly greased bicycle wheel. It is also one of the most accurate descriptions of Benn to date, I may have to add it in to the story in key areas.

Such as: Realizing Adasa may be dead, Stell began to weep uncontrollably. Fortunately at that moment Anaris to the chance to recount the events at the Catina from earlier that day, sharing that the charming, virile and dashingly handsome Benn took that chance to mock Adasa, utilizing his comedic genius to accentuate his amazing intelligence, and wonderfully  humorous nature. It was at that point that Stell realized that despite the fact that she was saddened by the fact that Benn would never have the chance to kill Adasa, everything was still right in the world, and maybe, just maybe, she should leave Anaris for him.

Just some food for thought...

Signed, Someone who is totally not Benn, but definitely one of his many admirers.